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Dermod Larkin Morfessa [ Death Eater ]
1432 Posts  •  59  •  Straight  •  played by Carys
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #135 on: March 30, 2019, 10:05:06 PM »
Character's name: Dermod Larkin Morfessa

Changes made: Everything after "Downfall and redemption (the final section) has been rewritten.
New RP response.
Checked the whole sheet for typos.
New sheet headers  (thank you Mori)
Aged up everyone throughout the sheet (technically he's 58 for another month but I'm anticipating NOT doing another rewrite this year...)
Moved his pre-birth history into "established family background" section.

*** Things that are exactly the same: His entire personality section. History up until the age of 56***

Approved! <33Dermod
« Last Edit: April 01, 2019, 08:56:58 PM by Sioban »

Edith Holthouse [ Hogwarts Adult ]
2769 Posts  •  23  •  snuggly when drunk  •  played by christine
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #136 on: April 02, 2019, 05:03:22 AM »
Character's name: edith holthouse
Changes made: new job, couple paragraphs of history. hogwarts adult main and writer secondary please and thank you

approved!

Amelia Lennox [ British Ministry ]
16 Posts  •  39  •  Heterosexual  •  played by nan
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #137 on: April 02, 2019, 07:09:37 PM »
Character's name: Amelia Lennox
Changes made: Changed job / added paragraph to history, and added Arithmancy Newt; would like to keep Artist secondary if possible, new membergroup is British Ministry and Dept for Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures

Approved~!
« Last Edit: April 02, 2019, 09:23:14 PM by Elena »



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Cliona Morfessa [ Dark Wizard ]
2014 Posts  •  74  •  Tom Riddle  •  played by Carys
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #138 on: April 05, 2019, 09:19:17 PM »
Character's name: @Cliona Morfessa
Changes made: Fixed ages throughout the sheet
Very small edits to personality section to reflect the fact that Voldie's been dead 4 years (hopefully I caught them all!)
Added Gabriella as sister in law and Rhiannon, her niece, under "children"
Minor edits made to history from "Around the same time, the woman's Ogham readings started to tell her worrying things." onwards. Three new paragraphs added to the end.


Thank you <33

Approved~!
« Last Edit: April 05, 2019, 09:50:21 PM by Elena »

Linnet Willowsong [ Elemental ]
902 Posts  •  19  •  asexual  •  played by Carys
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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #139 on: April 06, 2019, 04:03:40 PM »
DISCLAIMER: I'm under producer/manager's orders not to leave the house today. Hence another update!

Character's name: @Linnet Willowsong
Changes made: Fixed ages throughout the sheet
Minor edits to appearance (injury to foot due to being uprooted; hair has grey streaks due to poison damage)
Minor edits to personality (removed references to being in school, slight modifications throughout)
Added final paragraph to her history (turns out being a tree for a year isn't that interesting...)

Thank you! <33

approved! <33
« Last Edit: April 06, 2019, 05:04:48 PM by Olivia »

Pixie Clarke-Trickett [ Gryffindor ]
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  • "All you need is a little faith, trust, and pixie dust."
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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #140 on: April 14, 2019, 05:59:17 PM »
Character's name: @Pixie Clarke-Trickett
Changes made: - Ages changed throughout the sheet
- Minor edits to appearance
- Very minor edits to personality and likes/dislikes
- Seven paragraphs added to history including the reason for repeating her third year

Approved~!
« Last Edit: April 14, 2019, 06:12:40 PM by Elena »
 
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