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Dermod Larkin Morfessa [ Death Eater ]
1424 Posts  •  59  •  Straight  •  played by Carys
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #135 on: March 30, 2019, 10:05:06 PM »
Character's name: Dermod Larkin Morfessa

Changes made: Everything after "Downfall and redemption (the final section) has been rewritten.
New RP response.
Checked the whole sheet for typos.
New sheet headers  (thank you Mori)
Aged up everyone throughout the sheet (technically he's 58 for another month but I'm anticipating NOT doing another rewrite this year...)
Moved his pre-birth history into "established family background" section.

*** Things that are exactly the same: His entire personality section. History up until the age of 56***

Approved! <33Dermod
« Last Edit: April 01, 2019, 08:56:58 PM by Sioban »

Edith Holthouse [ Hogwarts Adult ]
2747 Posts  •  23  •  snuggly when drunk  •  played by christine
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #136 on: April 02, 2019, 05:03:22 AM »
Character's name: edith holthouse
Changes made: new job, couple paragraphs of history. hogwarts adult main and writer secondary please and thank you

approved!

Amelia Lennox [ British Ministry ]
22 Posts  •  39  •  Heterosexual  •  played by nan
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #137 on: April 02, 2019, 07:09:37 PM »
Character's name: Amelia Lennox
Changes made: Changed job / added paragraph to history, and added Arithmancy Newt; would like to keep Artist secondary if possible, new membergroup is British Ministry and Dept for Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures

[lena]Approved~![/lena]
« Last Edit: April 02, 2019, 09:23:14 PM by Elena »


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Cliona Morfessa [ Dark Wizard ]
2017 Posts  •  74  •  Tom Riddle  •  played by Carys
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #138 on: April 05, 2019, 09:19:17 PM »
Character's name: @Cliona Morfessa
Changes made: Fixed ages throughout the sheet
Very small edits to personality section to reflect the fact that Voldie's been dead 4 years (hopefully I caught them all!)
Added Gabriella as sister in law and Rhiannon, her niece, under "children"
Minor edits made to history from "Around the same time, the woman's Ogham readings started to tell her worrying things." onwards. Three new paragraphs added to the end.


Thank you <33

[lena]Approved~![/lena]
« Last Edit: April 05, 2019, 09:50:21 PM by Elena »

Linnet Willowsong [ Elemental ]
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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #139 on: April 06, 2019, 04:03:40 PM »
DISCLAIMER: I'm under producer/manager's orders not to leave the house today. Hence another update!

Character's name: @Linnet Willowsong
Changes made: Fixed ages throughout the sheet
Minor edits to appearance (injury to foot due to being uprooted; hair has grey streaks due to poison damage)
Minor edits to personality (removed references to being in school, slight modifications throughout)
Added final paragraph to her history (turns out being a tree for a year isn't that interesting...)

Thank you! <33

approved! <33
« Last Edit: April 06, 2019, 05:04:48 PM by Olivia »

Pixie Clarke-Trickett [ Gryffindor ]
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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #140 on: April 14, 2019, 05:59:17 PM »
Character's name: @Pixie Clarke-Trickett
Changes made: - Ages changed throughout the sheet
- Minor edits to appearance
- Very minor edits to personality and likes/dislikes
- Seven paragraphs added to history including the reason for repeating her third year

[lena]Approved~![/lena]
« Last Edit: April 14, 2019, 06:12:40 PM by Elena »
 
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Taylor [ OOC Account ]
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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #141 on: April 20, 2019, 09:45:43 AM »
bunch of minor updates:

Character's name: @Angelina Johnson
Changes made: updated history to reflect trading to Falmouth Falcons (okayed by @Christine )

Character's name: @Ffion Perry
Changes made: added in job title

Character's name: @Jasmine Williams
Changes made: changed strong area of magic from transfiguration to potions because i thought it made more sense for her, updated quidditch position

Character's name: @Soléy Trickett
Changes made: changed mother's maiden name/blood status to match @Alvar Trickett and added in family pets, as well as alvar and @Barbara Gibson as connections in her history

all approved!
« Last Edit: April 21, 2019, 12:47:39 AM by Olivia »

Luciana Bertinelli [ Dark Wizard ]
1239 Posts  •  20  •  plants & pasta  •  played by laura
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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #142 on: April 22, 2019, 05:24:32 AM »
Character's name: luciana bertinelli
Changes made: a few minor changes:

 - added "owner of il giardino" to occupation
 - changed mother's name to valentina corsini
 - added to final paragraph of history
 - updated rp response

[lena]Approved! Gave her the shop keeper secondary tag as well, due to her new business <33 @Laura [/lena]
« Last Edit: April 22, 2019, 12:02:24 PM by Elena »


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Melissa Morgenstern [ Guest ]
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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #143 on: April 24, 2019, 09:07:23 PM »
Character's name: @Melissa Morgenstern
Changes made:

- changed her maiden surname
- changed her surname to her maiden one
- added a sentence in history about her switching back to it
- changed display name

approveddd~
« Last Edit: April 24, 2019, 09:27:20 PM by Dylan »

Eris Rosier [ Death Eater ]
89 Posts  •  37  •  Gaius 💔  •  played by Laura
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #144 on: May 09, 2019, 01:39:29 AM »
Character's name: Eris Rosier
Changes made: promotion to Head of the Auror Office (applied for and approved by @Mel)

[lena]Approved![/lena]
« Last Edit: May 11, 2019, 10:52:28 PM by Elena »


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Theodore Nott [ St. Mungo's Employee ]
11 Posts  •  23  •  Demiromantic Heterosexual  •  played by Taylor
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #145 on: May 11, 2019, 12:28:49 PM »
Character's name: Theodore Nott
Changes made:
- changed profession/member group
- edited dressing style
- updated parents' ages
- added in name of the nott estate
- retconned out ministry and edited history in the section under "reprieve"

can he get the dark wizard secondary tag because he's still dark by association i guess hahaha

thanks! 🤩

[lena]Approved! [/lena]
« Last Edit: May 11, 2019, 03:06:48 PM by Elena »

Samuel Dickinson [ Artist ]
1331 Posts  •  38  •  straight  •  played by Carys
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #146 on: May 13, 2019, 07:54:00 AM »
Character's name: @Samuel Dickinson
Changes made:
- Changed membergroup to artist as he's currently not a professor
- Altered ages throughout the sheet
- Minor edits to dressing style
- Additions to general personality
- Minor edits to other personality sections (mainly to improve readability)
- Added Louise Ellington into history (during his 4th year, 6th year and present)
- Added Tatania Reed into history (aged 23 whilst travelling in Africa and several years later in England)
- Added Enitan Reed-Dickinson as his daughter and several visions of her
- Googled the history of the word "retcon"...because I suddenly realised I had no idea what it meant
- Added 3 paragraphs to end of history
- Updated RP response

Thank you! <3333

approved~
« Last Edit: May 13, 2019, 08:13:32 AM by Ashton »

Vincent Aguilar [ American Ministry ]
10 Posts  •  25  •  Bi  •  played by Chaw
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #147 on: May 20, 2019, 09:48:14 PM »
Character's name: @Vincent Aguilar
Changes made: His sexual preferences from straight to bi.

Additional changes to his sheet to support this change.
>Added  'and sometime he/him/guys'  to the existing 'she/her/girls statements'.
>A short descriptions of relationship when he was 17 years old that triggered it.
     (See the last half of the last paragraph of the chapter entitled "Vincent Stepping into Himself" 1993-1996)
>Other additions are made in shorter mentions.
    - add the male NPC name of Mateo Mendoza to the list of people of people he dated.
    -a small note of a unrequited love interest with a 'Shaman' in Australia
    - a short bout of 'jealousy' of a male friend.
>mirror spelling and grammar corrections.

Note: Theses changes are done to allow threaded roughly worked out with another driver.

approved!
« Last Edit: May 20, 2019, 11:58:20 PM by Olivia »

Rein Grundler [ Dragonologist ]
4 Posts  •  45  •  Bisexual  •  played by Axel/Alice
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #148 on: May 27, 2019, 11:39:53 PM »
Character's name: @Rein Grundler
Changes made: ~Aged up quite a few years
~added small history blurb to fix timeline with the age up
~made it look pretty
~aged up parents and siblings (Greta's stayed the same)
~added a new daughter to the family

under review!
EDIT #1 :: please check your PMs! <33
EDIT #2 :: approved!
« Last Edit: May 30, 2019, 08:54:22 PM by Olivia »

Aileen Devitt [ Healer-in-Training ]
662 Posts  •  19  •  Bisexual  •  played by Brian
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #149 on: May 30, 2019, 05:28:50 AM »
Character's name: @Aileen Devitt
Changes made: aged up from 16 to 18, changed member group from student to "healer-in-training", added paragraphs covering her last year in Hogwarts to the present day, updated parents ages, made a change to her dad's profession

under review!
EDIT #1 :: @Aileen Devitt please check your OOC PMs! <33
EDIT #2 :: approved!
« Last Edit: May 30, 2019, 06:55:28 PM by Olivia »

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