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Albus Dumbledore [ Portrait ]
3642 Posts  •  played by Dumblydore
Character changes & retcons!
« on: January 16, 2016, 05:51:11 PM »
If your character is already approved, you're in the right place!

If you've made any alterations to your character's sheet, or have retconned portions of the sheet, please reply to this topic with the following code and an admin will review it. As a note:
— You DO need to submit an update for any content changes (changes to personality, additions to history, adding connections, etc.).
— You do NOT need to submit an update if you are only changing aesthetic things (adding a spine, changing colors, updating numerical age to reflect a recent birthday, etc.).

Please note that you'll need approval from the respective area admin if you'd like to claim a current Position.
Any requests for Positions held previously will be cross-checked to prevent 'double-booking' of a Position.

Character's name:
Changes made: {Changes to personality, additions to history, etc. Please also specifically mention if a Student/Adult Position (Prefect, HoH, etc.) was added or removed.}

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« Last Edit: April 02, 2020, 06:47:34 PM by Olivia »

Ares Awning [ Inactive Character ]
1074 Posts  •  21 years old  •  Straight  •  played by Daphne
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2016, 12:19:23 AM »
Just a note -

It makes it a lot easier if you would tag your characters in your posts if you're not posting from that account, or link to their profile. It makes it easier for us to look at your sheet when you're sorting multiples!
« Last Edit: November 18, 2016, 05:38:47 PM by Ares Awning »

Albus Dumbledore [ Portrait ]
3642 Posts  •  played by Dumblydore
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2020, 06:34:54 PM »
Hi, everyone!

Now that we are about halfway through June playtime, we are pleased to announce that sheet update submissions for the upcoming term are officially OPEN!

Existing characters (i.e. already Sorted) being aged-up should be posted here in this thread. Your sheet should reflect the Year your character will be in when the new school term starts up in September.
(Brand new characters being Sorted for the first time should be posted Sort Me!)

As a reminder, please do not submit your sheet update until your character has met the appropriate Age-up Requirements. Please refer to this thread to check the status of your qualifying posts.
If you would like to age-up a character by more than one school year, please make a note of this when you submit so whichever admin handling your sheet is aware.

If you have a current Koldovstoretz student, please refer to this announcement before submitting your sheet update.

Any questions, please contact the respective School Admin!

~ The Admin Team
« Last Edit: April 02, 2020, 07:30:15 PM by Olivia »

Deirdre Coltrane [ Potioneer ]
55 Posts  •  18  •  heterosexual  •  played by Inga
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2020, 07:44:15 PM »
Character's name: Deirdre Coltrane
Changes made: I took out some student references, added a brief history of her seventh year. She wants to be a potioneer and should have the bronze cauldron now.
(the drop down field was still on sixth year although she was a seventh year... took out the year now as she's an adult.)

thank you <333

approved and Bronze Cauldron awarded!
« Last Edit: April 02, 2020, 07:54:45 PM by Olivia »

Freddie Snyder [ Gryffindor ]
46 Posts  •  15  •  heterosexual  •  played by Inga
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2020, 08:03:40 PM »
Character's name: Freddie Snyder
Changes made: aged him up, changed him to fifth year, added a little bit of history as he was only sorted quite recently.

thanks <333

approved!
« Last Edit: April 02, 2020, 09:34:43 PM by Olivia »

Leah Miller [ Horned Serpent ]
12 Posts  •  Fourteen  •  Heterosexual  •  played by Leah Miller
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2020, 09:08:45 PM »
Character's name: @Leah Miller
Changes made: Aged her up (I hope it's right...), advanced her to her third year (she should be currently going into her third year, but I goofed and took a whole year off from this website, so she never aged up into her second year. I hope that made sense...), aged her parents up, added her second-year and projected third-year information to her history, changed avatar (which was a complete pain...), and I think that's it (if there's anything I missed, I'm sorry...)

approved~!
« Last Edit: April 03, 2020, 12:19:34 AM by Mel »

Gene Horowitz [ British Ministry ]
62 Posts  •  18  •  played by lianne
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #6 on: April 02, 2020, 09:19:50 PM »
Character's name: @Gene Horowitz
Changes made: big yikes...

- total appearance rewrite (got rid of model)
- total personality rewrite

- changed mother's name
- wrote out some history
- elaborated more on pre-hogwarts life
- added newts & changed membergroup / job title --> british ministry
- added history for last year of hogwarts

i shall return

approved!
« Last Edit: April 03, 2020, 12:36:55 AM by Olivia »


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Emily Rhodes [ Wampus ]
9 Posts  •  Seventeen  •  Heterosexual  •  played by Leah
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #7 on: April 02, 2020, 09:40:30 PM »
Character's name: @Emily Rhodes
Changes made: Updated history, changed Emily's age, the ages of her parents, and her sister's age (aging them by one year), and changed Emily's year from Sixth to Seventh.

approved~
« Last Edit: April 04, 2020, 03:12:34 AM by Mel »

Aase Trickett-Cassoway [ Hufflepuff ]
175 Posts  •  15  •  Heterosexual  •  played by Olivia
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #8 on: April 03, 2020, 01:59:59 AM »
Character's name: Aase Trickett-Cassoway
Changes made:
-- cleaned up her appearance section, made her a little taller
-- cleaned up personality section (no changes to major traits)
-- updated her family members’ ages
-- added a few paragraphs to cover Fourth Year history
-- updated RP response

<333

Approved~
« Last Edit: April 03, 2020, 07:50:34 AM by Mel »
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Barbara Gibson [ Ravenclaw ]
61 Posts  •  15  •  played by lianne
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #9 on: April 03, 2020, 07:34:12 AM »
Character's name: Barbara Gibson
Changes made: added a bit to history for fifth year, retconned connection with Mary Hunt, aged to 5th year

@Barbara Gibson  approved
« Last Edit: April 03, 2020, 09:21:51 PM by Laura »


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Léon Lachapelle [ Papillonlisse ]
76 Posts  •  Seventeen  •  Yes  •  played by Mel
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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #10 on: April 03, 2020, 01:22:26 PM »
Character's Name: @Léon Lachapelle
Changes Made:
--added sixth-year updates.
--aged up parents.
--aged up Léon, changed year to seventh year.
--made some grammar corrections throughout the sheet, no changes apart from what's mentioned above.

thank you! <33


@Léon Lachapelle approved!
« Last Edit: April 03, 2020, 08:44:18 PM by Laura »

Zviad Gogoladze [ Klyk Vampira ]
727 Posts  •  18  •  heterosexual  •  played by Inga
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #11 on: April 03, 2020, 04:02:44 PM »
Character's name: Zviad Gogoladze
Changes made: basically just fixed some typos, changed ages throughout the sheet and added a few paragraphs of history of his seventh year and to explain why he is repeating his seventh year. (I showed this section of the history @Dylan and got approval for it)

thanks <3

approved @Inga
« Last Edit: April 03, 2020, 04:21:17 PM by Dylan »

Lena Mason [ Hufflepuff ]
6 Posts  •  Sixteen  •  Heterosexual  •  played by Leah
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #12 on: April 03, 2020, 05:04:06 PM »
Character's name: @Lena Mason
Changes made: Aged up, changed year, aged up parents and brothers, added info for incoming year, and tried to make everything grammatically correct with the numbers

approved!
(however she should be 16 and not 17 - changed it for you!)
« Last Edit: April 04, 2020, 06:24:40 AM by Olivia »

Leona Millegan [ Ravenclaw ]
14 Posts  •  Seventeen  •  Heterosexual  •  played by Leah
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #13 on: April 03, 2020, 05:05:43 PM »
Character's name: @Leona Millegan
Changes made: Aged up, aged parents up, added incoming year info, aged brother up, and tried to make everything grammatically correct with the numbers, updated year

@Leah please check your PMs!
EDIT :: approved!
« Last Edit: April 05, 2020, 07:00:27 PM by Olivia »

Jari Trickett [ Hufflepuff ]
195 Posts  •  15  •  played by Samm
Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #14 on: April 04, 2020, 01:18:39 AM »
Character's name: @Jari Trickett
Changes made:
-- updated age
-- he is now nearly fluent in gobbledegook #lifegoals
-- added a few paras for fourth year (all in extra history 2)
-- updated RP response

approved!
« Last Edit: April 04, 2020, 06:37:29 AM by Olivia »

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