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Offline Carrie Marshall

Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #105 on: July 06, 2020, 04:00:30 AM »
Character's name: Carrie Marshall
Changes made:
-- updated her member group to Herbologist (please also give her the Shop Worker secondary tag, thanks!)
-- aged-up family members appropriately
-- added several paragraphs to cover Seventh Year and graduation

thanks! <33

[lau]approved!
« Last Edit: July 08, 2020, 11:02:28 PM by Laura »
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Offline Konrad Lidström

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #106 on: July 08, 2020, 06:05:27 PM »
Character's name: @Konrad Lidström
Changes made:

-- aged up
-- added career
-- grammar/spelling checks
-- seventh-year paragraph in extra history
-- added exam scores
-- new RP sample

[lau]approved!
« Last Edit: July 08, 2020, 11:03:33 PM by Laura »

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #107 on: July 14, 2020, 03:16:05 AM »
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Character's name: @Clementine Russell
Changes made: changed her age, added some paras at the end of her hist, changed her year

approved!
« Last Edit: July 14, 2020, 03:30:32 AM by Olivia »


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Offline Louise Ellington

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #108 on: July 17, 2020, 02:13:09 PM »
Character's name: Louise Ellington
Changes made:
- changed ages throughout the sheet
- changed membergroup to Professor (if possible she'd like to keep artist and shop keeper as secondary tags)
- added history to her likes
- added some mentions of assisting a historian writing books about history (and finishing one of them alone after his death)
- added recent years
- changed RP sample to a more recent post

I think that's it.

Thanks <33

approved!
added her birth year in for you <33
« Last Edit: July 20, 2020, 02:47:58 AM by Olivia »

Offline Sidonie Riviere

Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #109 on: July 17, 2020, 06:04:11 PM »
Character's name: @Sidonie Riviere
Changes made:

She's been MIA for like 2 playtime years. I dunno how she became a 6th year to be honest. x_X
You can ask the peeps I've been plotting with that she hasn't been posted in quite some time.

I:
- Fixed her sheet up because it got wonky, changed colors.
- Aged her up to 17
- Reworded her appearance
- Reworded her personality
- Modified her school history
- Added 5th year
- Added 6th year

approved!
« Last Edit: July 20, 2020, 02:54:12 AM by Olivia »

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Offline Dino Caviezel

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #110 on: July 17, 2020, 08:12:04 PM »
Character's name: @Dino Caviezel
Changes made: Literally tiny changes to his history because I'm keeping him as a fifth year. Removed references to chars who no longer exist or are now older than him.

@Carys please check your PMs! <33
EDIT :: approved!
« Last Edit: July 23, 2020, 10:09:35 PM by Olivia »

Offline Reena Reddington

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #111 on: July 19, 2020, 06:37:25 PM »
Character's name: @Reena Reddington
Changes made:
- Aged her and family members up by a year
- added fourth year history
- did some spellcheck on previous history

approved!
« Last Edit: July 20, 2020, 03:34:14 AM by Olivia »
 

Offline Peter Willow

Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #112 on: July 19, 2020, 06:58:24 PM »
Character's name: @Peter Willow
Changes made:
- Aged him up to 17. Aged up family and cat.
- Cried a little that my baby is growing up
- Wrote his 6th year of history
- Increased his height a little.

approved!
« Last Edit: July 20, 2020, 03:34:22 AM by Olivia »

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #113 on: July 19, 2020, 07:17:28 PM »
Character's name: @Leah Miller
Changes made: Aged her up, aged her parents up, and added a bit of history, referencing her age-up, plus attending camp

Character's name: @Emily Rhodes
Changes made: Aged her up, aged her parents and sister up, and added a bit of history, referencing her age-up, plus attending camp

Character's name: @Leona Millegan
Changes made: Aged her up, aged her parents and brother up, and added a bit of history, referencing her age-up, plus attending camp

Character's name: @Lena Mason
Changes made: Aged her up, aged her parents and brothers up, graduated her oldest brother, and added a bit of history, referencing her age-up, plus attending camp

you already aged-up all your girls at the end of the school year, so you're good to go! ;)
« Last Edit: July 20, 2020, 02:20:33 AM by Olivia »

Offline Rainer Fischer

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #114 on: July 19, 2020, 08:35:35 PM »
Character's name: @Rainer Fischer
Changes made:

- Updated his age (again)
- re-wrote the majority of his school years through recent
- updated some connections

approved!
« Last Edit: July 20, 2020, 03:38:42 AM by Olivia »

Offline Ezra Cohen

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #115 on: July 27, 2020, 07:41:04 PM »
Character's name: @Ezra Cohen
Changes made:
-made him go to law school, first year
-added some in his 7th year history about being pressured to apply to tamsen tinker by his mom and studying
-added GNAT to early adulthood
-added start of law school
-gave him a 1993 yellow mustang named Honey <33

approved @Dylan !! sorry for the delay
« Last Edit: August 02, 2020, 07:06:30 AM by Lianne »

Offline Stewart Ackerley

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #116 on: July 30, 2020, 11:34:41 PM »
Character's name: @Stewart Ackerley   
Changes made:
- Got reapproved. Yay! ^_____^
- Updated Ages
- Added some history to get him up to current playtime.
- removed some connections no longer viable
- that's about it

He's a Bronze Cauldron Pin holder too. :D


approved~
« Last Edit: July 31, 2020, 10:52:56 AM by Dylan »

Offline Bérénice Bonaccord

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #117 on: August 12, 2020, 03:34:06 AM »
Character's name: bérénice bonaccord
Changes made:
removed all hypnosis sf mentions
changed healing specialisation to potions and plant poisoning, updated mentions through sheet appropriately
changed position to botanique professor
no other changes

(please remove hypnotist sf badge)

approved!
« Last Edit: August 13, 2020, 03:29:50 AM by Lianne »
 

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Offline Noah Haas

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Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #118 on: September 02, 2020, 08:54:04 AM »
Character's name: noah haas
Changes made:
added to/reworded appearance
changed family members’ names
 > made his mum a basciano (approved by samm)
made dad a no-maj
 > updated history accordingly
reformatted history into sections
added character connections

approved!
« Last Edit: September 02, 2020, 02:57:37 PM by Sioban »


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Offline Delaney Mullen

Re: Character changes & retcons!
« Reply #119 on: September 13, 2020, 06:35:01 PM »
Character's name: @Delaney Mullen
Changes made: Aged up 1 year since I've been inactive, added a few paragraphs to the history, breaking ground on relationship with family.

I have also re-saved the content of the Mullen EFB as well as updated The Burning Beard Shop Listing.

approved @Delaney Mullen !
« Last Edit: September 13, 2020, 08:31:37 PM by Lianne »

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